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MG SS ISHAQZAADE

PART 6

It’s the end of another month with maan trying hard to get his project approved but things were not that easy in this world .. favoritism n tricks are a part of this nasty commercial world which he was unaware of ..n thus was still struggling to survive ..things turned worst when geet couldn’t make to meet him till 2 days n when she came back she was dull like never be4 ..her father had seen his pic below her pillow … got to know about her changed life style .. n a few days ago had even seen maan in one of his clients office getting humiliated though he wasn’t at fault but The Handa’s never bother to look at the other side …he knew him as Yash Khurana’s spoilt son after the concern he has shown for geet during her stay in the hospital n had investigated about his character but that was the carefree maan singh khurana he got to know ….rather than geet’s maan who he has changed into NOW ….

At Armaan’s house geet has finally managed to meet maan after hearing the news of her father fixing her marriage with some NRI …a feeling so scary creeping in her mind making her scared n made her run away from the house without telling anybody …almost giving an impression that SHE RAN AWAY WITH MAAN …n ended up here in her disturbed state of mind calling maan crying …n thr he was sitting by her side discussing n trying to make her convince to go back n talk with her father ….

Geet (low voice) : I just don’t knw what exactly I shld say to dad .. I mean ..aisa kuch kabhi kaha nahi ..n now all of a sudden its all so …

Maan (held her hand) : u don’t need to worry mien uncle se baat karta hoon ..i am sure he’ll understand ..

Geet (tensed n snapped her hand) : maan u don’t get it do u …my dad is not some 19th century psycho …its brij veerji poisoning him .. pata nahi dad kyun nahi dekh paa rahe ..sirf unki good books mien aane ke lye brij veerji is playing dirty with his sentiments ..

Maan : than y don’t u tell him …he is ur father he will listen to u na ..

Geet : mien kehti thi na ..love is all problems of the world in one bunch …..sahi kehti thi ..

Abb khud hi phas gayi hoon iss hi bunch mien …uhh

Dad was always super protective for me n after that accident he turned obbessesive to no limits …I mean mere room se ek pen girne ki bhi awaaz ayigi tou he will come rushing as if koi bimb photo gaya hu …n pata nahi unko Yash uncle se kya problem hai ..i ve been noticing this since the time I ve joined HI ..thr is defo something wrong b/w KC n HI …

Maan (left a sigh n held her by her shoulder looking straight in her eyes) : okiee noe listen .. apna calculative mind plss ek minute ko side par rakho n plss let me talk with ur father … (she tried to interrupt) .. no Ifs n Buts …iss time par it’s the best we can do ..

Finally after much discussion Maaneet decided to talk with Mr.Handa unaware of the fact that he has already seen Maan once getting humiliated in some office on his some appointment ..setting his 1st impression as a failure ..

AT HANDA HOUSE ..

Thr was a pin drop silence ever since maan confessed that he wants to marry geet ..every single soul was restless knowing how much rivality both Handas n Khurana shares though its not a life n death involved but yes they are hard core rivals ..n here the two innocent hearts unaware of thr elder’s relation are pleading to accept thr love ..

Brij gave up on his increasing temper n roared ..

Brij : just what the hell do u think Khurana standing here ..get lost .. there is no way ill marry my sister to u …n anyways who are u urself ..nothing just nothing .. what can u give my sister ..even this shoes u r wearing is of ur father’s money u r nothing but just the son of Yash Khurana ..n a carefree boy like u can never take care of my baby sister ..so better get lost ..

Maan listened to all this calmly n gestured its fine to the crying geet who stood in a corner silently crying with her head dipped down in guilt hiding frm all .. least she wanted was maan getting humiliated in front of her eyes ..but his eyes showed some assurance in them n she looked at them unblinkingly ..while he smiled nodding negatively like not-to-cry ..

While maan made his way towards her dad sitting on his knees ..

Maan : uncle mujhe nahi pata business mien aap aur dad kaise relation rakhte hain but I guess aap itna tou jante hain ke mere ghar mien koi bhi aisa insaan nahi hai jo aapki beti ko takleef puhanchane ke bare mien sochega bhi ..

Mien janta hoon aaj mien kuch nahi hoon .. life mien dad ki protective circle se nikalne ke baad 1st day se struggle kar raha hoon ..but geet ne bataya tha jab aapki shaddi geet ki mom se huyi thi tou aapke paas bhi yeh banglow cars kuch nahi tha bas thi tou ek khwahish ..apne pyaar ko dunya ki saari khushyan dene ki …

Wohh khwahish hai mujh mien uncle …aaj iss pal mien agar saans bhi lee raha hoon tou sirf iss liye ke kuch aur pal mien geet ke saath bita paaon …

Mien janta hoon apni life mien mene kabhi kisi baat ko serious nahi liya but aap ne pyaar kiya hai na apni life mien uncle tou dekhye meri ankhoon mien aur bataye kya aapko ratti bhar bhi shaq hai ke mien uss insaan jis se mien apni zindagi se bhii ziada pyaar karta hoon koi dukh koi choot puhanchne donga ..?

Mr. Handa still looked un convenced n how couldn’t he it was his baby princess he has grown her up like a feather caring with all his love how can he give her to a person who himself is leading a life with so many difficulties n how he never showed any sense of responsibilities towards anything even after passing his MBA an year be4 he was busy partying spending his time in nothing .. how can a father trust him enough …

But thr comes his angel daughter holding her tears n heart beats .. with small steps n sat on her knees beside maan her eyes dipped down ..n held her fathers hand just the way she use to in childhood .. n he held her hand like always tight n in a firm protective manner …she looked up with tears filled in her eyes pleading …with her shaking merely audible voice ..

Geet : bas ek mauqa dad ..

Her dad looked at her confused how his practical thinking strong headed daughter ..papa’s girl was weakening ..but be4 he could say anything brij asked her harshly ..

Brij : chotti tou janti bhi hai kya mang rahi hai ..aur kis se baat kar rahi hai .. iss Khurana ..//

But he was cutt off by geet who was now talking with her father looking straight in his eyes with a determination …

Geet : mien uss insaan se baat kar rahi hoon jo aaj se 24 saal pehle apni jeeb mien kuch teen sau (300) rupay liye iss sheher mien aaya tha uss insaan ke saath jis ko aap sab se ziada pyaar karte thay ..bas ek yaqeen lekar …

Mien uss insaan se apne pyaar ke liye ek mauqa mang rahi hoon veerji jis ne apni zindagi mien pyaar bhi kiya aur apni mehnat aur vishvaash se apni ek alag pehchaan bhi banayi ..

Mien bas ek mauqa mang rahi hoon apne dad se jo meri life mien sab se ziada importance rakhte hain …

Mohinder Handa : wohh yaqeen woh vishvaash tumhari maa Rano ka tha geet jis ne mujhe himmat di yahan tak puhanchne ki …

Geet (said immediately) : aur utna hi yaqeen mien Maan par karti hoon dad ..

Maan was still gaping at this girl looking at her like he has never seen her be4 its been 3 months since HE have confessed his feelings but geet never did said that directly though every of her act speaks volumes of her love …but for the first time the way she excepted her feeling in front of her family made him so happy as if he got the whole world listening that she TRUST him .. her trust was all what he wanted to earn ..n he did the feeling was over whelming …

But thr geet’s family was still not looking convinced n than her tai ji pestered brij to say something be4 his chaca ji takes any decision but it went in vain as Mohinder stopped him gesturing by his hand n made of maaneet stand on thr feet ..embracing geet side ways while maan stood in front ..

Mohinder : Tiwari uncle ka beta Ranveer wanted to marry u since last 3 years when he met u first in ur cousin’s marriage geet .. but I told him to wait until u finishes ur studies ..n now that u have finished ur studies n in next 2 month they are coming over from London to our house …

Both maaneet were shocked to listen to this ..maan was going to say something never in any life he would let his geet marry some NRI idiot …they loves each other than y this old man was geeting so filmy snob he didn’t knew but be4 he could say anything mohinder made him quite with his next immediate words ..

Mohinder : Maan ..u have one whole month .. 10,000 …u heard me right that’s ur target ..u will have to earn that amount in one month if u don’t want geet to marry someone else this is my condition to prove ur love …AND ALSO IF U WANT TO HAVE THAT ONE CHANCE TO PROVE URSELF ..otherwise geet will be married to Ranveer ..

Maan (said with determination) : fine sir ..i will .. if this whats makes u beleive me with ur daughter I accept this challenge ..

Geet was still slightly confused.. looking at maan’s now smiling face she was scared for the future n the way her dad was talking she knew him too well no matter how much he loves her but when it is her life ..he will make it hell difficult for maan to win this challenge …but his next set of words made her confused hurt n sad as well ..

Mohinder : n I hope after this if this guy fails u won’t hesitate to move onn n marry Ranveer …

Geet dipped her head down for she didn’t knew if she will ever be able to do this .. she loves her dad the most its true but she can’t promise if she’ll be able to forget the love she has for maan EVER ..but be4 she was asked to answer maan answered looking at her seeking a promise from her ..

Maan : she will sir … I promise u if I failed to prove my love she will do what ever u’ll ask her to ..

Geet blinked her eyes trying to brush off the gathering tears ..just didn’t knew what else to do in that moment n maan left from thr determined to start this journey ..

But was it going to be easy …??

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phew finished it …sorry for not updating me kind off blank with every story it was hard to formulate it …hope it isn’t tht boring …

n for all other updates u may have to wait a bit more longer since its my entrance exams for bachelor due in november so me busy with the preparation ….really sorry for vanishing like this but i won’t be able to update others since i am totally blank with other stories this was typed in a rough draft so managed to edit it n update …

PRECAP :-

meeting in the balcony again ….EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Wink

ooppsss geet super ghussa ….me wondering if she’ll accept to fulfill the promise given by maan …Ouch

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